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very nice

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Very nice work! Awesome! Good sales to you!

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Thanks man!

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Nice! How about a suggestion for version II? Slow the intro down. A slower beginning, accelerating as you move into the initial galaxy, would make for a better ‘establishing shot.’ It all feels too rushed. I’d have bought this if the galaxy move alone was slower. If we need it fast we can also modify this ourselves. Just my two cents.

Also, you might consider a variable ending with a light-burst reveal, into black and/or also into an alpha-mask, allowing any final shot to be used. Maybe this is already masked? I can’t tell.

These 2-3 changes would really rock your sales! Just some advice from an “old guy” with 25 years of (digital and analog) production experience. Here’s wishing you good sales. CIAO

PublicSpirit

Thank you for these tips, i really appreciate it. I love getting some honest feedback so I can improve my work for future projects.

My intention was to make a slower camera zoom, going through the universe with no hurry. But when i found the logo intro music for this project was looking for, i decided to make the animation work with the music. That’s probably the reason why it feels a bit rushed.

Yes, it crossed my mind but i dismissed it for some reason, though now I might update this project with at least a black BG version. Although it is rather easy to change the BG to anything you like, if you look deeper in to the AE project.

I’m going to make a little series out of these universe logo animations, i hope you will like them (and give some feedback) when they are finished.

But again, thank you mate!

PublicSpirit

I made a new space/scifi project, i think you might like it!


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