First Upload Rejected! - Please give constructive criticism.

Hi all,

We’re new to themeforest and recently had our first upload rejected. (Landing Page Template) View Demo Here

Based on the reviewer comments, we have indeed identified padding/margin issues, typography issues as well as design issues.

We would love to hear your thoughts as well as to get your advice on this project in regard to design, originality, layout, etc.

We are great listeners and we welcome any feedback (no profanities please). We hope to get this project up on themeforest and we look forward to your insights.

Best Regards, Theme Gold

It’s way too busy. Too much is fighting for attention.

The header area, the buttons would look better aligned to the text(align left). I also don’t think the black border around the slider fits that well. Try a darker blue(i’m looking at sky, so the same would apply to the other colors). The fonts you use are a bit boring. I bit more work needs to be done on them (choosing the right one). one thing you could try is switching the smaller one to a serif.

Hierarchy of Typography is an issue all through the page. as an example,if you look at “More Features” and “Beautiful striking color scheme” they are too close in size. that and the the nice icon beside the nice color… means that you see that before the the “More Features”. Reducing the size of “beautiful striking color scheme” (and elements of that nature) would help improve the look.

The read more buttons don’t stand out enough and In my opinion should be aligned to the right( the eye will go there once it’s done reading the blurb)

The tabs and the testemonial background are too loud, and give too much contrast. switching them to being white with a softer border would help alot in reducing the loudness of it.

Hi lastrose,

Thank you for your response. Some of your suggestions have been taken under consideration and we intend to make these changes very soon.

Best regards, Theme Gold